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The draft came back wrong. Which part broke?

Brief, standard, revision pass, verification, record — and the symptom that tells you which one you are missing.

Based on the Work Atlas: 38,525 evidenced tasks across 1,949 careers.

You asked for a tighter version and got a different one. Or you have rewritten the same opening six times and it still reads dead. Or three of you edited one piece with the same assistant and it came out worse than any single draft. Those are three different faults, not one, and each points at a different part of how you work.

01

What are the five parts?

Think of a restaurant kitchen. The brief is the order ticket. The standard is how this house does things. The pass is one cook doing one job. The check is the person who looks at the plate before it leaves. The record is the note that stops the same argument happening again next Tuesday. Take any one of the five away and food still goes out — wrong in a way you can name.

02

Which part are you missing?

Read the last column first. Whichever line describes what happened to you last time is your answer, and the day beside it is where that part gets built.

The brief

Days 2, 12, 13
What it decidesWho it is for, what it claims, and what it argues against.
When it is missingA draft that is fine and about nothing. You reorder it three times looking for the argument.

The standard

Days 6, 11
What it decidesThe rules, each carrying its own test.
When it is missingEvery piece is good and no two are the same. Nobody can take over from you.

The pass

Days 13, 14
What it decidesOne job per instruction, markable afterwards.
When it is missingYou ask for a better version and get a different one. Nothing accumulates.

The check

Days 15, 23, 24
What it decidesOne rule per look, plus what only you can verify.
When it is missingSomething plausible reaches a reader and returns as a question you cannot answer.

The record

Days 20, 25
What it decidesWhat changed, what you checked, and what you could not close.
When it is missingA settled decision reopens in six months for somebody who was not there.
Which two get skipped

I do not have a number for how often each part is the missing one. Nobody has counted it, and a figure invented here would be exactly the kind of claim this article is going to tell you to go and check. What I can tell you is which two go missing in my own work, and why. The brief, because starting is easier than deciding. The record, because by the time it is due the work is already finished and nobody is waiting for it.

03

Where does the assistant actually sit?

It does one of the five. The other four stay with you whatever is on your screen.

A checklist is not a system

A checklist runs once, at the end, and only ever catches what you already thought to put on it. Most of the work here happens earlier than that, where there is still nothing to check — which is why the brief is both the part you skip and the part that costs most when it is gone. When did you last write down who a piece was for before you started writing it?

Who each part serves

That is the test for whether you have built one. Read the five back and check who each is serving:

  • The brief points at your reader.
  • The standard points at whoever picks the work up after you.
  • The pass points at the version of you who has to review this tomorrow.
  • The check points at whoever signs it off.
  • The record points at somebody who has not joined yet.
What the tool cannot reach

It does the pass — the actual sentence work, and it is good at it. It cannot settle your claim, cannot know which rules your desk holds, cannot check anything living outside the text, and cannot tell you what it failed to close. A policy analyst rewriting a summary owns four of those five before the assistant sees a word.

When you should ignore all of this
  • A note to yourself. You do not owe it a record. Write the note.
  • Thinking on the page. Start before your claim is settled if that is how you find it — just never hand that draft on as finished work.
  • Regulated writing. You will need more than these five: review, retention, privacy and sign-off controls sit on top, and none of them are optional because you have a brief.
04

What it looked like on this site

2.15 → 0.92you-ratio, before and after · the book it was measured against runs 0.74
One page, one word of feedback

Two days ago another page on this site went out to readers. It is a tool called TextStock, and the copy explaining it had been written with an assistant. The readers came back with one word: artificial. One of them said it read like nothing a real person would write.

The words were plain and the sentences were short, so the first guess was wrong. What the counting found was a tic. Every one of the eighteen paragraphs closed on the same shape of line — short, balanced, an opposite folded inside it. Size is earned, never assigned. A starting point, not a verdict. One of those is a nice line. Eighteen is a machine.

Go and do this to your own last three pieces before you read any further. Cover everything except the final sentence of each paragraph, and read only those. If they all have the same shape, you have the same tic, and no amount of rewriting the middles will touch it.

  • A ratio of 2.15. The page said it, this and that more than twice as often as it said you and your. It was talking about the subject instead of to the reader.
  • Zero, three times over. Across 523 words: no analogy, no question asked of the reader, no table.

The repair took two passes and the first one failed. Cutting the tics cut the warmth out with them, so the page came back correct and cold. Only the second pass, which put the analogies and the direct questions back, landed at 0.92.

Now hold that against your five parts. No standard, so nothing about the copy was checkable and the fault walked through every review. No check, so the first person to catch it was a reader. There was a record, and that is the only reason pass two did not quietly undo pass one.

Tip — that fault was found by counting, not by reading. Ten more read-throughs would not have surfaced it, because a tic reads perfectly fine one paragraph at a time.

05

The four words that unlock it

Four words, one card each. Each card ends on a question you can put to your own last piece of work.

Brief

What it means
The page you write before drafting: who it is for, what it claims, what it argues against.
Why it matters
It is the part everybody skips, and the part that decides every later cut.
Example
A handler in their first fortnight; routing errors come from two borderline categories, not carelessness.
Key question

Could somebody refuse the claim in your brief?

Standard

What it means
A rule with its own test inside it, kept where the tool loads it without you.
Why it matters
A rule you have to remember is followed on good days and skipped on the days it mattered.
Example
No term a new starter would not know, unless it is defined in the same sentence.
Key question

Would your rule still hold on a Thursday evening with something due?

Pass

What it means
One instruction with one job, phrased so you can mark it done afterwards.
Why it matters
Improve this cannot be marked and so binds nothing. Cut 15% can be counted.
Example
Cut 15%, measured in words, taking nothing out of the evidence paragraphs.
Key question

Could you tell, tomorrow, whether the pass was followed?

Record

What it means
What changed, what you checked yourself, and what you could not close.
Why it matters
It stops a settled decision being reopened by somebody who was not in the room.
Example
Section 4 reordered because two readers applied the rule to the exception case.
Key question

Who reads your record, and have they joined yet?

06

Questions people ask

What is an AI-assisted writing system?
ConceptualWhat

Five decisions you make around the drafting, rather than a way of talking to the tool. The brief settles the job. The standard says what acceptable looks like. The pass changes one thing at a time. The check tests the result. The record says what happened. Your assistant helps with one of the five. The other four stay with you.

How is a writing system different from a collection of prompts?
ConceptualWhy

A prompt is one instruction at one moment, and it ages out when the model changes under you. These five do not: what the work has to achieve, which rules hold across every assignment, how you separate one revision from the next, how you verify a claim, and what you write down. Swap your tool tomorrow and all five still stand.

What belongs in the brief before drafting starts?
PracticalWhat

Name your reader, the change you want in them, your central claim, the evidence you actually have, and the position you are arguing against. Then anything that cannot move. A brief settles what your assistant has no safe way to guess. It is not a sentence-by-sentence plan of the piece.

Why should each writing rule include a test?
ConceptualWhy

Because 'be concise' cannot be marked and 'no paragraph over sixty words' can. A rule with a test inside it survives being handed to somebody else, and it catches the fault on the tenth read, when your own eye has stopped seeing it. That is the difference between a preference and a standard.

What should the writing record contain?
PracticalWhat

What you started from, the tool if it mattered, what you asked for, what you checked, what you could not close, and who decided. Four lines is usually enough. Write it while the work is still open — a record reconstructed three weeks later is mostly invention, and you will not be able to tell which part.

07

Pick one and do it today

08

Keep building the system

A system is what is left when you stop remembering to be careful.

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