Edit an existing page

Update the About page for Greenridge Landscaping before Monday morning. Replace the second paragraph to explain our new maintenance packages, add a short bio line for new project lead Marco Alvarez, and ensure the contact button remains visible on mobile. Keep the existing voice and keep it under 350 words.

Before I save the edited About page, make it easy for the office manager to approve. Put the new maintenance packages in a short bullet list, bold Marco Alvarez’s name and role, show exactly where the contact button sits on mobile, and flag any claims that need a supporting stat or date.

I swapped a sentence on the About page to say 'new maintenance packages start at $120/month' but the office manager, Dana, says that might be misleading. I don’t know whether to keep the price visible or remove figures until we finalize tiers. If I leave the price, Dana might push back for accuracy; if I remove it, visitors lose a quick cue. What's the best next move to stay honest and avoid a second revision?

Every time I touch the About page to fix one line I end up rewriting most of it, delaying the refresh and making Dana lose trust in my edits. Where am I losing control — phrasing, approvals, or scope creep — and what single habit will keep edits surgical so updates ship on time? Explain how to apply it on the next change.