Comment on a slide

I left a clear, actionable comment on slide 7 asking for citation and a clearer data label. Send that exact comment to Maya in science with a one-week response deadline, then mark it unresolved so I remember to follow up if she doesn't reply by next Friday.

Before I post this comment to the shared slide deck, make it easy for Maya to act: state the missing citation at the top, show the desired citation format, and highlight the data label that reads 'growth' so she can correct it quickly.

I left a comment on slide 7 about the missing citation and called the chart label ambiguous. Maya is sensitive to critique; I’m afraid it sounds blunt and she’ll ignore it or push back. I don’t know how she prefers feedback or whether she’s the one who can add the citation. What’s the most effective way to rephrase the comment and whom else should I notify so the citation gets added within a week?

Across many decks I add comments that sit unresolved for weeks and I lose credibility with colleagues. I don’t know whether the problem is my phrasing, who I notify, or where I leave the comment. Which habit should I change first so comments get acted on: change phrasing to include explicit next steps and deadlines, always @-mention the responsible person with calendar context, or follow up in person within 48 hours? Recommend one concrete habit and a 30-day routine to embed it.