Why is passive voice sometimes considered weak writing?
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In one line
Passive voice can make writing less clear and less lively.
George Orwell — English author and journalist (1903–1950) George Orwell, who advised writers to avoid too much passive voice. Image: Wikipedia
The rule
In passive voice, the subject receives the action, not does it.
For example: The ball was kicked by Ravi. (passive) Instead of: Ravi kicked the ball. (active)
Let's understand it simply
Imagine you are watching a cricket match. If you say, "The ball was hit," you do not know who hit it. But if you say, "Virat hit the ball," you know exactly who did it. Passive voice hides the doer. Active voice shows who is acting. This can make your writing stronger and clearer.
Active vs Passive Voice
Active Voice
Passive Voice
Who does the action?
Clear: Ravi kicked the ball.
Not clear: The ball was kicked by Ravi.
Sentence length
Shorter
Longer
Directness
Direct
Less direct
How it works
In passive voice, the object comes first, then the action, then the doer (if mentioned).
The doer is often left out, so the sentence feels incomplete.
The verb uses a form of "be" (is, was, were) plus the past participle (eaten, made, written).
The sentence can sound slow or less direct.
The story behind it
English teachers and writers noticed that active voice makes writing more direct and easy to follow. Over time, many style guides (books on good writing) advised using active voice for clearer, stronger sentences. Famous writers like George Orwell also warned against too much passive voice.
Where you see it in real life
News reports: "A decision was made" (passive) — we do not know who made it.
School essays: "The experiment was done" (passive) — who did it?
Government notices: "Rules were changed" (passive) — by whom?
Cricket commentary: "The catch was dropped" (passive) — which player?
Why it matters
Active voice makes your writing clear and direct.
Readers understand who is doing what.
Many exams and jobs prefer clear, strong writing.
Good writing skills help in letters, reports, and emails.
Common mistakes
Thinking passive voice is always wrong. (It is useful sometimes, but not always.)
Using passive voice to hide the doer. (This can make writing unclear.)
Forgetting to mention who did the action.
Remember it
If you want your writing to be strong, show who does the action. Use active voice when you can.
Check yourself
Change this to active voice: 'The roti was made by Amma.'
Amma made the roti. (Now we know who did it.)
Why is 'The ball was thrown' weaker than 'Rahul threw the ball'?
Because we do not know who threw the ball in the first sentence.
Is passive voice always wrong? Why or why not?
No, sometimes it is useful, but too much can make writing unclear.